Day 65 - 15th May - Refining Further

Today i  continued onward with the refining and altering of my mock outcome as to attain a more refined and higher quality outcome, I spent a large amount of my time on altering the Ready Player One advert as i've not had enough practice yet to be confident with Photoshop, so altering the elements was a task that had a number of pitfalls  for me. As a result i used more time to get the results that i wanted as i was having to try out different tools and backtrack constantly as i was unsure what i was doing, it is a program that i find useful when it works for me but takes up a lot of time for me to do some of the assuredly most simple changes.    

 I felt that altering the title left me with a far more reliable and effective advertisement, as the result appears more polished and eye-catching with the text framing and drawing your eye across the composition. I selected to make the text red as it allows for a clearer link to the piece and allows for a subtle contrast that doesn't detract from my art.
Following this work i began to clean up my pages by removing the pencil and scanning residue on the pieces to make the panels more polished and clear cut. This was done again using Photoshop, and i believe it vastly improves the pages presentation when placed cohesively,   it also helps with the transition between pages.

From here i feel that i am almost ready for my next draft that will hopefully alleviate any final minor issues that once sorted will leave me with a final result that is ready to send off and have printed properly for a more professional look.